Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 25 August 2021
Tornado facts
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Kia ora Raima, you have blown me away once again (pun not intended). This is truly some high quality work. I really love how you have used full sentences in your fact boxes.
ReplyDeleteYou said that you are really interested in Bangladesh' tornado. Why don't you do a small research task on it? Tell me about what you find. Do this on a DLO.
Raima wow! I am so pleased to be reading Miss Holland’s comments.. I too am super impressed with the work that you are producing during home learning time.. what a lot of people that lost their lives in that one tornado.. keep
ReplyDeleteUp. The great work Raima
Mrs Stewart
Kia ora Raima,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting DLO. You have found some really interesting facts about Tornados. I didn't know the facts about the Bangladesh tornado. That is so many lives lost. How incredibly sad and heartbreaking for those people. We've had our own stories around Tornadoes in NZ. Just recently a nice man lost his life in a freak tornado in Auckland.
I hope you take up Miss Holland's suggestion and do the research task on this.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader