There was a girl named Heather, She has long wavy brownish blond hair, she had green eyes with a tint of blue, she's 15 and very kind, her best friends are Ellie, Karla and Millie and she is the main character. Ellie has blond hair with blue eyes, and she is also very kind and is 16. Karla has black hair and brown eyes, she loves science and she's 15. Millie has brownish with a little bit of blond, she has brown eyes, she's very kind and she loves singing and is 16.
One day Heather and her friends went shopping in the busy city. While they were shopping for clothes in H&M they heard people screaming they went to check what was happening. They turned the corner and saw the soap floating, all of the sodden the soap started to fly around the store. All of the girls went to go by the door to go out of the store but they looked outside and realised the store was floating
This is a work in progress.
W.A.L.T write an engaging narrative.
I wrote about these teenage girls and the store shopping and soddenly the store started to float and there was soap flying around the room.
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