Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 17 April 2020
How to make cereal
We had to make instructions on how to make cereal so i made a google drawing and wrote the steps and did drawings of what you need to do to make it more easy.
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Wow Raima, I am so impressed with the detail you have put in. I love how you images match your instructions. I wonder if you could make it a bit more specific? For example, how much milk do you pour in? Do you do it gently?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Miss Holland, next time i will be more specific and put what you need before i do the instructions.
DeleteWow Raima this is so cool, I like how your instructions are simple and straight forward. The pictures look great, keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Raima. I like how detailed this is. I would probably follow your instructions when I make cereal.
ReplyDeleteHi Raima, I liked this post because you made this by yourself using shapes. Maybe next time add more detail on your sentences.
ReplyDeleteAlso maybe next time do a question.
Whats your favourite cereal?
Hi Raima, I like how you made the cereal all by yourself. I like all the colours and its very colourful! Next time you could so a WALT and say what you were learning.
ReplyDeleteHow long did it take to make it?
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