Today i woke up and it was snowing outside!. I went to get changed into warm clothes and had breakfast and then I went to go play at my front yard. I built a snowman, an Igloo and I had a stash of snowballs in the igloo incase i had intruders coming to break my igloo. I decided to call the igloo snow hangout. As soon as I started to build another snowman my mum yelled out to me. I started to run back to see what she wanted. She said “There is a snow building competition. Would you like to sign up to do it?” “DUHHH OF COURSE!” I shouted with joy. We started to drive to where the competition was. It was in a huge domain with the perfect amount of snow I signed up for and then we started to build our snow building. I was making a star wars statue but i had to search up some things on my mum's phone first for the details they said it was fine to do that. After i was done i waited for a bit till everyone was done, soon as everyone was finished we started to go around and look at everyones creations, there was this really cool one it was a big igloo with cool designs on the snow bricks and in the inside it had snow furniture, and this other cool creation someone made was a statue with a girl about to throw a snowball. Now the judges started to judge 3 place was the igloo with the cool designs, 2 place was the statue about to throw a snowball, and 1 place was…….MEEE THE STAR WARS STATUE! I was so happy I was jumping with joy and i one a trophy (not snow) and the trophy was shaped like a snowball. I couldn't believe that i won but i wasn't going to be a soure winner and i wasn't going to say “HAHA I WIN AND YOU LOSS!” instead i said gg (good game) and shaked there hand and said “don't worry i wish you luck for next time!”. Never be mean and be a soure winner or loser.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 27 March 2020
Snow Statue
Today i woke up and it was snowing outside!. I went to get changed into warm clothes and had breakfast and then I went to go play at my front yard. I built a snowman, an Igloo and I had a stash of snowballs in the igloo incase i had intruders coming to break my igloo. I decided to call the igloo snow hangout. As soon as I started to build another snowman my mum yelled out to me. I started to run back to see what she wanted. She said “There is a snow building competition. Would you like to sign up to do it?” “DUHHH OF COURSE!” I shouted with joy. We started to drive to where the competition was. It was in a huge domain with the perfect amount of snow I signed up for and then we started to build our snow building. I was making a star wars statue but i had to search up some things on my mum's phone first for the details they said it was fine to do that. After i was done i waited for a bit till everyone was done, soon as everyone was finished we started to go around and look at everyones creations, there was this really cool one it was a big igloo with cool designs on the snow bricks and in the inside it had snow furniture, and this other cool creation someone made was a statue with a girl about to throw a snowball. Now the judges started to judge 3 place was the igloo with the cool designs, 2 place was the statue about to throw a snowball, and 1 place was…….MEEE THE STAR WARS STATUE! I was so happy I was jumping with joy and i one a trophy (not snow) and the trophy was shaped like a snowball. I couldn't believe that i won but i wasn't going to be a soure winner and i wasn't going to say “HAHA I WIN AND YOU LOSS!” instead i said gg (good game) and shaked there hand and said “don't worry i wish you luck for next time!”. Never be mean and be a soure winner or loser.
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Hi Raima
ReplyDeleteI am enjoying checking in with the Room 1 blogs. Its great to see what you have all been up to! What a fabulous piece of writing! I had to look at the date as I wasn't sure when it had been written given that it is so sunny outside! Was it based on something you have read or seen on TV?
I would love to see more of your writing Raima.
Hope that you and your family are doing ok in your bubble
Take care
Mrs Stewart
Take care
Mrs Stewart
Hi Raima
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing I would like to see you star. Great to see you your not bragging about winning. Hope you had a good Easter