One dark stormy night there was an abandoned hospital. It had spiders and spider webs everywhere. It was the scariest hospital in town, no one goes there. There's a rumor in town that ghosts haunt it.
I have been told that a little girl went missing and no one ever found her. Her name was Annabelle she ran away from home, she went to hide at the hospital and never returned. They said it was many many years ago they think she died at the hospital young. She wouldn't be alive now but maybe her soul is. Sometimes I think what does the hospital look like is it dark,cold,dirty or scary? I have no idea something in me wants to go there but i know i'm not meant to.
The next day I heard them talking about Annabelle again they said they found a note at her old house it said “ I'm going I may or may not come back don't look for me i need time alone fix your mistakes and i'll fix mine” no one knew what “fix your mistakes and i'll fix mine”. Everyone thought they knew the whole story but of course not.
Annabelle was only around seven shes was pretty good writer for that age Its creepy because she was only a little girl.
That's it, I have to go to the hospital. I go out the window quietly and run. When I'm at the hospital i think to myself this is way more scarier than I thought. I go in brave and steady and look around. It's all dusty and dirty I start walking and i say “is anyone there” “but of course no one is going to say yes or anything” I think to myself.
I hear a little girl start laughing, I get really scared and say “ Hello anyone there” I hear it again a little girl laughing saying “Come find me” she starts laughing more and more the closer I get , the more I hear her. After about twenty minutes later I walk in a room and see bloody hand mark on the wall i walk back slowly and run but something stops me in front of me a little girl “who are you” I say, “you know me its Annabelle” she says quietly, “no it can't be” i say i am so scared the scaredest i have been in my hole life “don't be scared you will be the first one i let go” She said she grabs my hand and says “come on, come with me,” She says excited we go to the room and she asked me “what did I come here for” i say “i want to know the rest of the story about you,'' i say, she says “well there really isn't a rest of the story, you can go now” she says “Alright” I said loudly i run and run so fast back home I hug my mum and say “i'm sorry i made a big mistake she is pleased that i am safe and sound but i don't feel safe anymore i regret everything i have done but now i know not to do it again but i am so grateful to be alive. THE END
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